Production feedback

You use an appropriate production logo for Warner Brothers with accompanying jazz music which indicates the genre.  You have made your own music track using garage band which shows commitment and a desire to explore the available software.  I think a visual logo rather than an audio sting for the ‘Shadow production’ would be more appropriate but it shows creativity and the shot of a shadow of the detective in black and white is an arrestingly visual opening. The film title is intriguing and the voice-over adds another element of intrigue. The codes and conventions of the genre are followed clearly using music and mise-en-scene.  A range of camera shots are used and a script allows you to plan and storyboard a scene that is conventional for the genre.  An exterior scene ends the sequence which shows development  of the narrative   There are a range of transitions and creativity has been shown in the use of shots. There are elements of excellence in the production which suggest that this meets the criteria for the lower end of level 4 49/60

Final feedback

Fortune, you have worked methodically on the film building up a variety of layers to your edit which has taken time but you have endeavoured to explore the possibilities of the software.  there are a number of very good element to your planning such as the script which shows an awareness of codes and conventions of the genre.  There are still some gaps, however which you can rectify now so that you do not lose marks.

Answer all the evaluation questions fully and ensure all research and planning is evident.

Complete and publish

My Name is Fortune

Final Cut